✅ 1. Grammar & Word Choice Errors + Corrections

a. Subject–verb agreement

❌ Domestic travel and overseas travel has
✔️ Domestic travel and overseas travel have

❌ both ways of travel is
✔️ both ways of travel are

❌ The services in domestic travel is
✔️ The services in domestic travel are

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b. Countable/uncountable nouns

❌ less moneys
✔️ less money

❌ cost less moneys
✔️ cost less money

❌ more experiences* (not used here but common mistake)
✔️ more experiences / a better experience

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c. Missing apostrophes

❌ dont
✔️ don’t

❌ couldnt
✔️ couldn’t

❌ its (when meaning “it is”)
✔️ it’s

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d. Plural forms incorrectly used

❌ availabilities
✔️ availability

❌ peoples
✔️ people

❌ optionss
✔️ options

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e. Word form / inappropriate suffix

❌ comfortables
✔️ comfort

❌ costlys
✔️ costly

❌ different experience → needs plural when comparing generally
✔️ different experiences

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f. Articles / determiners

❌ domestic places is easier to book
✔️ domestic destinations are easier to book

❌ on holidays (can be okay, but better as)
✔️ during holidays

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✅ 2. Corrected Version of Your Essay (Still Simple, But Fixed)

Introduction

Domestic travel and overseas travel have many similar things but also a lot of differences that travelers should think about. People often choose between them based on price, comfort, services, and availability. Even if both ways of travel are fun, they still bring different experiences for people.

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On one hand

On one hand, domestic travel usually costs less money because you don’t need to pay for visas or expensive flights. It is also more comfortable because you don’t have to deal with other languages or long hours on the plane. The services in domestic travel are sometimes simple but they’re quick and easy to understand. Also, domestic destinations are more available and easier to book anytime, even on short notice.

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On the other hand

On the other hand, overseas travel can be more costly because of international flights and other fees. However, it offers more unique experiences and the services in many countries can be more special or high-quality. But it can be less comfortable because travelers might get tired from long flights or get confused with different languages. Availability also becomes a problem because some overseas destinations can’t be booked easily, especially during holidays.

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Conclusion

In conclusion, domestic travel and overseas travel both have good points and bad points for different kinds of travelers. Domestic trips are cheaper and easier, while overseas trips are more exciting but also more expensive and complicated. Choosing which one is better really depends on what the person wants and how much money they want to spend.